2009-06-10

Renhai Reflections 114: Onset


Onset

A Renhai by Gillena Cox (gc) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Wedding march —
rose peals precede
a bride's footsteps. /gc

Off to fetch the newspaper — /vs
first morning cloud, heavy grey. /gc

The last moment
of the grad ceremony —
mortars in the air... /vs

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10 comments:

Devika said...

A fine collaboration, Gillena and

Does the newspaper weather forecast predict rain!? :))

between set one and three...its usual here that wedding ceremony immediatly precedes grad ceremony, and mostly for girls...in my case it took another 10 years...for a folly called love!

aahh...memories -- where do we bury them!!

wishes,
devika

Devika said...

A fine collaboration, Gillena and Masago, :)

devika

John McDonald said...

well done both of you
john

Janice Thomson said...

This is another fine one - good choice of title too. Well done Gillena and Vaughn.

RBroeker said...

Good one! Can be seen everywhere and daily. But these points of view make your work special.

Best wishes
Ralf

Bill said...

Nice work.

get zapped said...

I love this. It really expresses a season.

Masago said...

Thank you all!

Devika: I had no idea about wedding and grad ceremonies as you describe. Amazing coincidence!

Devika said...

Oh i said precede...wedding succeeds grad ceremony...parents would just wait for the graduation to be over to pack the girl off :-)

wishes,
devika

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