2009-06-28

Renhai Reflections 119: Portraits in the Sky


Portraits in the Sky

A Renhai by Janice Thomson (jt) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Aurora borealis —
green glowing sheets
erupt in silence. /vs

Twin orbs in the sky... /jt
at each end of the lake /vs

Each wave
in the ocean wearing a halo —
sun dog. /jt

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12 comments:

Devika said...

Oh fine portraits, Janice and Masago :)

I loved all,

and Janice, How's your summer enjoyment going?? :)
and when are you back at yours??

wishes,
devika

j. andrew lockhart said...

I always love the ones that you two do.

John McDonald said...

yes excellent pairing
john

aurora said...

Nice work, you two. :)

borut said...

De-light-ful!:)

Bill said...

I liked your article in Frog Pond.

RBroeker said...

Full of light. Enkindling.

Best wishes
Ralf

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Pamela said...

I've seen the northern lights once -- from my own little town.
But I want to see them like you describe them here.

Masago said...

Thank you Devika, Andrew, John, Aurora, Borut, Bill, RBroeker, Justin, and Pamela.

Bill, I'm pleased you like the article. I hope to announce this on the blog when Frogpond makes this issue available on-line.

jem said...

Beautiful. I'd love to see some of these sky phenomena, maybe one day. But in the meantime great to experience them through your verse.

susane said...

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