2009-06-21

Renhai Reflections 117: Now Here, Soon Gone


Now Here, Soon Gone

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r)

The odd cloud
here and there, the sun
pokes through. /vs

Ladybug on my thumb tip — /zh.r
a little friend, soon gone. /vs

The young fawn
peeks from behind the bushes —
its "hi", "goodbye." /zh.r

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6 comments:

RBroeker said...

I am not in the position to qualify something like this properly, but in my eyes - it is brilliant. Even the first and the last line sound like they have never been apart.

Best wishes
Ralf

Devika said...

There are quite a lot of life situations in which it all just seem so,

but then, its all within the system --eco or solar -- we are the ones who fail to be with them,

I liked the imageries, Masago and Zhanna :)

wishes,
devika

John McDonald said...

another great collaboration
john

Masago said...

Thank you all for your very kind words!

jem said...

This one is super. I like the way it shows us to appreciate even the littlest glimpse of things.

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