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8 hours ago
2009-06-21
Renhai Reflections 117: Now Here, Soon Gone
Now Here, Soon Gone
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r)
The odd cloud
here and there, the sun
pokes through. /vs
Ladybug on my thumb tip — /zh.r
a little friend, soon gone. /vs
The young fawn
peeks from behind the bushes —
its "hi", "goodbye." /zh.r
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5 comments:
I am not in the position to qualify something like this properly, but in my eyes - it is brilliant. Even the first and the last line sound like they have never been apart.
Best wishes
Ralf
There are quite a lot of life situations in which it all just seem so,
but then, its all within the system --eco or solar -- we are the ones who fail to be with them,
I liked the imageries, Masago and Zhanna :)
wishes,
devika
another great collaboration
john
Thank you all for your very kind words!
This one is super. I like the way it shows us to appreciate even the littlest glimpse of things.
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