2007-11-12

Rengay Through the Seasons #11 [1-2]

by Masago: Rengay #11 (Nov 11-17), Verses 1-2 (of 6)

A crust of white / becomes a sheet of dew — early morning.
Steamed mirror — she applies / final touches of lipstick.

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6 comments:

Gillena Cox said...

nice jutaposition


much love
gillena

aurora said...

Nice one!

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

you bring up some vivid mental images!

John McDonald said...

like it
john

polona said...

i love the way this one begins - two excellent images

Masago said...

Thank you everyone for your warm comments!