2007-11-15

Rengay Through the Seasons #11 [1-5]

by Masago: Rengay #11 (Nov 11-17), Verses 1-5 (of 6)

A crust of white / becomes a sheet of dew — early morning.
Steamed mirror — she applies / final touches of lipstick.
His canvas depicts / autumn colours — the essence / barely captured.
New jeans — that worn out look with / rips and tears.
Winterized garden — holes / where veggies had grown.

Click here for the previous rengay in the series.

6 comments:

aurora said...

I like where you've taken this. :)

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

empty and cold...

John McDonald said...

interesting one
john

iamnasra said...

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polona said...

another excellent addition

Masago said...

Aurora: Thank you!

Andrew: Yes, we're heading there.

John: Thanks.

iamnasra: Okay, will have a look.

Polona: Thanks!