by Masago: Rengay #11 (Nov 11-17), Verses 1-5 (of 6)
A crust of white / becomes a sheet of dew — early morning.
Steamed mirror — she applies / final touches of lipstick.
His canvas depicts / autumn colours — the essence / barely captured.
New jeans — that worn out look with / rips and tears.
Winterized garden — holes / where veggies had grown.
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6 comments:
I like where you've taken this. :)
empty and cold...
interesting one
john
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another excellent addition
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