2007-11-01

Rengay Through the Seasons #9 [1-5]

by Masago: Rengay #9 (Oct 28 - Nov 3), Verses 1-5 (of 6)

Revealing itself / upon a banana leaf — October wind.
Tree foliage descends — naked limbs emerge.
A battleship tattoo / under a sleeve rolled-up — blood-pressure test.
Fast-food server — my order taken between / tongue-ring flashes.
A rabbit-sized lump — the snake barely slithers.

Click here for the previous rengay in the series.

5 comments:

aurora said...

Very good progression, Vaughn. :)

floots said...

even only seeing it through your words i shudder a little :)
cheers

John McDonald said...

nice
john

polona said...

awwww... love it!

Masago said...

Aurora: Thanks.

Floots: I know the feeling. ;-)

John: Thanks.

Polona: Thanks.