2007-11-02

Rengay Through the Seasons #9 [1-6]

by Masago: Rengay #9 (Oct 28 - Nov 3), Verses 1-6 (of 6)

Revealing itself / upon a banana leaf — October wind.
Tree foliage descends — naked limbs emerge.
A battleship tattoo / under a sleeve rolled-up — blood-pressure test.
Fast-food server — my order taken between / tongue-ring flashes.
A rabbit-sized lump — the snake barely slithers.
Pink popcorn — a plastic toy whistle / at the box's bottom.

Click here for the previous rengay in the series.

5 comments:

aurora said...

I haven't had pink popcorn in years!:) Nice continuation, Vaughn.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

and on it goes. :)

floots said...

russian dolls
everything contains more than first appears
enjoyed this vaughn
thank you

polona said...

an interesting image to round it up.

Masago said...

Aurora: We got it as kids, it is amazing you can still get it (at least here in Canada).

Andrew: :-)

Floots: Yes, thanks.

Polona: Thanks.