2007-11-29

Rengay Through the Seasons #13 [1-5]

by Masago: Rengay #13 (Nov 25 - Dec 1), Verses 1-5 (of 6)

Cascades of pink / among windowsill cacti — first openings.
Popcorn out of the microwave — steam bursts from the corners.
Weight watcher — the host offers her another / piece of cake.
Channel surfing — a new gadget shown on / the shopping channel.
Crowded holiday mall — she squeezes his hand tighter.


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5 comments:

Aurora Antonovic said...

:) This is such a nice progression. :)

floots said...

love this moment

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

touching in its own way.

John McDonald said...

enjoying it
john

Masago said...

Thank you all!