2007-11-09

Rengay Through the Seasons #10 [1-6]

by Masago: Rengay #10 (Nov 4-10), Verses 1-6 (of 6)

Prairie horizon — ducks in a 'V' fly in / from the north.
An A-frame roof raised - the urban view expands.
A horse shoe / over the fireplace mantle — fading memories.
Basement reno — the wooden sawhorse, now / the kids' pony.
Telephone pole nest — an osprey lands with fish.
E-mail message: "Our last kid moved out / just yesterday."

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6 comments:

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

"Our last kid moved out
just yesterday."
I'm not ready for that. :(

Pamela said...

I'm melancholy with this one. But, that is not a bad thing. Just means you're touching me.

John McDonald said...

thoughtful one
john

aurora said...

Fantastic!

polona said...

oh! ah!
love it!

Masago said...

Thank you everyone. Andrew, I'm with 'ya.