2007-11-09

Rengay Through the Seasons #10 [1-6]

by Masago: Rengay #10 (Nov 4-10), Verses 1-6 (of 6)

Prairie horizon — ducks in a 'V' fly in / from the north.
An A-frame roof raised - the urban view expands.
A horse shoe / over the fireplace mantle — fading memories.
Basement reno — the wooden sawhorse, now / the kids' pony.
Telephone pole nest — an osprey lands with fish.
E-mail message: "Our last kid moved out / just yesterday."

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5 comments:

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

"Our last kid moved out
just yesterday."
I'm not ready for that. :(

Pamela said...

I'm melancholy with this one. But, that is not a bad thing. Just means you're touching me.

John McDonald said...

thoughtful one
john

polona said...

oh! ah!
love it!

Masago said...

Thank you everyone. Andrew, I'm with 'ya.