2007-11-14

Rengay Through the Seasons #11 [1-4]

by Masago: Rengay #11 (Nov 11-17), Verses 1-4 (of 6)

A crust of white / becomes a sheet of dew — early morning.
Steamed mirror — she applies / final touches of lipstick.
His canvas depicts / autumn colours — the essence / barely captured.
New jeans — that worn out look with / rips and tears.

Click here for the previous rengay in the series.

7 comments:

aurora said...

Hey, I love those jeans. Mine have been treated with espresso. :)

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

nice :)

Borut said...

Yes, what about the essence? Man's essence...?:)

John McDonald said...

interesting
john

Pamela said...

I'm trying to figure the theme. My brain has that worn out look this morning.

polona said...

another transformation...blove it

Masago said...

Aurora: Espresso! Now that's original.

Andrew: Thanks.

Borut: Yes, another essence to meditate upon. ;-)

John: Thanks.

Pamela: :-)

Polona: You're a very clever lass! :-)