2007-10-31

Rengay Through the Seasons #9 [1-4]

by Masago: Rengay #9 (Oct 28 - Nov 3), Verses 1-4 (of 6)

Revealing itself / upon a banana leaf — October wind.
Tree foliage descends — naked limbs emerge.
A battleship tattoo / under a sleeve rolled-up — blood-pressure test.
Fast-food server — my order taken between / tongue-ring flashes.

Click here for the previous rengay in the series.

8 comments:

aurora said...

That last one is pretty fantastic, Vaughn.

Pamela said...

eewwwwww... when someone speaks to me and I see a tongue ring I freeze up and can't take my eyes off of it.

I don't hear a word they say... ha

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

can't wait for tomorrow. :)

floots said...

i love this one vaughn
thank you

Borut said...

Tongue-tied... I'm tongue-tied!:))

John McDonald said...

great
john

polona said...

excellent (i'm pretty sure of one theme)

Masago said...

Aurora: I suppose it is a bit out there. :-)

Pamela: I know what you mean!

Andrew: It's here. :-)

Floots: Thanks.

Borut: *ha ha*

John: Thanks.

Polona: Thank you. Hmmm, wonder what that could be? :-)