2007-10-10

Rengay Through the Seasons #6 [1-4]

by Masago: Rengay #6 (Oct 7-13), Verses 1-4 (of 6)

Yellow leaves / falling in the sun...like / flakes of snow.
Her lush blond hair — first gray pulled out.
Sudden gust... his toupee lifts off, over / the bridge rail.
We pass over, the muffler does not — railway crossing.

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7 comments:

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

very interesting add-on.

floots said...

at least it makes the car sound like a hot-rod for a while :)
(you have my sympathy on the bill though)

Borut said...

All is well that ends well...?

aurora said...

Yuk yuk yuk.

polona said...

tat's a noisy addition :)

Richard Kay said...

Absolutely tore me apart.

Masago said...

Andrew: Thanks.

Floots: *LOL*

Borut: Yes... we'll see.

Aurora: ;-)

Polona: Very good. :-)

Richard: *LOL*