2007-10-05

Rengay Through the Seasons #5 [1-6]

by Masago: Rengay 5 (Sep 30 - Oct 6), Verses 1-6 (of 6)

Autumn morning — an old barn bites down / into the ground.
Abandoned farm truck... its door also in the box.
River valley — a rusted bicycle frame / lodged in an elm.
A small piece / of embedded barbed wire — tree trunk.
A yellowing telegram: "Coming Home Now".
Their initials / with nineteen-twenty-one — large, flat rock.

Click here for the previous rengay in the series.

7 comments:

aurora said...

Love the feel to this one.

Pamela said...

now I'm melancholy

floots said...

stunning end to this vaughn
pulls it all together
loved it

John McDonald said...

well done
john

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

nice addition.

polona said...

oh yes... great ending

Masago said...

Thanks everyone!