Rengay Through the Seasons #6 [1-5]

by Masago: Rengay #6 (Oct 7-13), Verses 1-5 (of 6)

Yellow leaves / falling in the sun...like / flakes of snow.
Her lush blond hair — first gray pulled out.
Sudden gust... his toupee lifts off, over / the bridge rail.
We pass over, the muffler does not — railway crossing.
Lake-side autumn picnic — the boom box plays hits.

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J. Andrew Lockhart said...

there's no escape -- I can't stand hearing a radio at the park.

floots said...

i'm with andrew

Pamela said...

ditto boom box at park.
I prefer the melody from the wind.

that toupee has me curious

get zapped said...

This is wonderful and whimsical, like the autumn wind.


polona said...

more ugly noise... brrr!
but an interesting turn :)