2007-10-18

Rengay Through the Seasons #7 [1-5]

by Masago: Rengay #7 (Oct 14-20), Verses 1-5 (of 6)

Autumn lawn... more leaf-mulching than / grass-cutting.
National Geographic — she clips pictures for school.
Grandma blinks / for the fourth straight time — family portrait.
A young man / across the table... a speck / in her eye.
Vacuuming some crumbs — the tinkle of an earring.

Click here for the previous rengay in the series.

8 comments:

aurora said...

This one's kind of cute. :)

(pssst - there's an "r" missing from "earring")

Masago said...

[woops, thanks]

Borut said...

Well, vacuuming really sounds promising...!:) I like it. Making room for the language of truth...?:)

John McDonald said...

like it vaughn
john

Richard Kay said...

This one really had me sucked in!

get zapped said...

I enjoyed the sights, sounds and fun woven throughout.

polona said...

lost and found? or just lost
like it anyway

Masago said...

Aurora: Thanks.

Borut: Thanks... philosophically speaking, yes.

John: Thank you.

Richard: Ha, ha! Very good.

gz: Thanks!

Polona: Good question. :-)