Rengay Through the Seasons #5 [1-5]

by Masago: Rengay 5 (Sep 30 - Oct 6), Verses 1-5 (of 6)

Autumn morning — an old barn bites down / into the ground.
Abandoned farm truck... its door also in the box.
River valley — a rusted bicycle frame / lodged in an elm.
A small piece / of embedded barbed wire — tree trunk.
A yellowing telegram: "Coming Home Now".

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J. Andrew Lockhart said...

That new part is very powerful!

floots said...

such an evocative image
thank you

Borut said...

Through technological develoment, man is trying to make a perfect replica of himself - the perfect being...? Still a long way to go...?:)

John McDonald said...

lovely tension

polona said...

great twist while still pertaining to the theme(s)

Masago said...

Andrew: Thanks.
Floots: Thanks.
Borut: A long way. ;-)
John: Thanks.
Polona: Thanks.