Rengay Through the Seasons #9 [1-2]

by Masago: Rengay #9 (Oct 28 - Nov 3), Verses 1-2 (of 6)

Revealing itself / upon a banana leaf — October wind.
Tree foliage descends — naked limbs emerge.

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aurora said...

Ah, the beauty of autumn!

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I agree. :)

floots said...

i enjoyed this as a piece of autumn
then enjoyed it again as an image of a child descending from a tree
so double thank you :)

Borut said...

It's very strange but the leaves on the two apple trees in front of our kitchen just won't let go... I'm waiting for the naked limbs, to be able to see into the autum marshes lying beyond...zksiok

John McDonald said...

nice one

get zapped said...

great imagery and I can feel the wind....

polona said...


Masago said...

Aurora, Andrew: Beauty indeed!

Floots: Thanks. Once again you've found something novel in these verses... well done.

Borut: Hmmm... last year folks didn't get much of a winter, maybe it is going to happen again.

John: Thanks.

GZ: Many thanks!

Polona: Thank you!