by Masago: Rengay #9 (Oct 28 - Nov 3), Verses 1-2 (of 6)
Revealing itself / upon a banana leaf — October wind.
Tree foliage descends — naked limbs emerge.
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About Masago
- Masago
- Edmonton, Alberta, Canada
- From "The Haiku Anthology" I became interested in Haiku and I have since written numerous haiku, senyru, and tanka. "Masago", my haiku pen-name, means "grain(s) of sand" in Japanese. I have recently started learning Esperanto and Japanese. A few years ago I developed a new eastern verse form which we now call 'Renhai'.
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7 comments:
Ah, the beauty of autumn!
I agree. :)
i enjoyed this as a piece of autumn
then enjoyed it again as an image of a child descending from a tree
so double thank you :)
It's very strange but the leaves on the two apple trees in front of our kitchen just won't let go... I'm waiting for the naked limbs, to be able to see into the autum marshes lying beyond...zksiok
nice one
john
great imagery and I can feel the wind....
Aurora, Andrew: Beauty indeed!
Floots: Thanks. Once again you've found something novel in these verses... well done.
Borut: Hmmm... last year folks didn't get much of a winter, maybe it is going to happen again.
John: Thanks.
GZ: Many thanks!
Polona: Thank you!
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