2007-10-12

Rengay Through the Seasons #6 [1-6]

by Masago: Rengay #6 (Oct 7-13), Verses 1-6 (of 6)

Yellow leaves / falling in the sun...like / flakes of snow.
Her lush blond hair — first gray pulled out.
Sudden gust... his toupee lifts off, over / the bridge rail.
We pass over, the muffler does not — railway crossing.
Lake-side autumn picnic — the boom box plays hits.
Roadside vendor — cobs of corn overflow / onto the ground.

Click here for the previous rengay in the series.

5 comments:

aurora said...

Tumble, tumble, tumble! :) (And yes, that was Korean.)

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

yum! :)

floots said...

love the way this returns to the first image
thank you

polona said...

well rounded.

Masago said...

Thank you everyone!