2007-10-30

Rengay Through the Seasons #9 [1-3]

by Masago: Rengay #9 (Oct 28 - Nov 3), Verses 1-3 (of 6)

Revealing itself / upon a banana leaf — October wind.
Tree foliage descends — naked limbs emerge.
A battleship tattoo / under a sleeve rolled-up — blood-pressure test.

Click here for the previous rengay in the series.

7 comments:

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

this one's getting more and more interesting !

floots said...

i can see this one very clearly

Borut said...

Huhu, the last one made me laugh... It's probably the spirit of the warrior in me..., lauhging at me...!?:)

John McDonald said...

very good
john

aurora said...

Very interesting indeed.

polona said...

oh, how intriguing!

Masago said...

Thank you everyone. :-)