2007-10-09

Rengay Through the Seasons #6 [1-3]

by Masago: Rengay #6 (Oct 7-13), Verses 1-3 (of 6)

Yellow leaves / falling in the sun...like / flakes of snow.
Her lush blond hair — first gray pulled out.
Sudden gust... his toupee lifts off, over / the bridge rail.

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8 comments:

floots said...

hair today ..... :)

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

ha!! :)

Borut said...

A revelation of sorts...:)
With the hair of our 'automatic thinking' gone, true thoughts may appear... The bridging...!?:)

John McDonald said...

oops!
john

Richard Kay said...

Goodness me, a hair-raising adventure if ever I've heard one!

aurora said...

Ha! to Richard's comment, and ha! to this series. :)

polona said...

this one, along with richard's comment (fro the second time tonight), made me laugh out loud :D
(also, i sense a theme or two)

Masago said...

Thank you everyone... all I can say is :-)