by Masago: Rengay #9 (Oct 28 - Nov 3), Verses 1-4 (of 6)
Revealing itself / upon a banana leaf — October wind.
Tree foliage descends — naked limbs emerge.
A battleship tattoo / under a sleeve rolled-up — blood-pressure test.
Fast-food server — my order taken between / tongue-ring flashes.
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8 comments:
That last one is pretty fantastic, Vaughn.
eewwwwww... when someone speaks to me and I see a tongue ring I freeze up and can't take my eyes off of it.
I don't hear a word they say... ha
can't wait for tomorrow. :)
i love this one vaughn
thank you
Tongue-tied... I'm tongue-tied!:))
great
john
excellent (i'm pretty sure of one theme)
Aurora: I suppose it is a bit out there. :-)
Pamela: I know what you mean!
Andrew: It's here. :-)
Floots: Thanks.
Borut: *ha ha*
John: Thanks.
Polona: Thank you. Hmmm, wonder what that could be? :-)
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