Rengay Through the Seasons #14 Summary

by Masago: Rengay #14 (Dec 2 - 8, 2007) Summary

Polly's cracker

The dog's legs / have become shorter — first snowfall.
Playground sunset shadows — school kids grow taller.
Around and around — the kitten almost catches / its own tail.
I put my finger / through the parrot's cage — Polly's cracker?
Seated, we wait to leave — the train beside us backs up.
Empty koi pond — an orange leaf "swims" / toward me.

The central theme of this rengay is "Misperception", something that is a daily occurrence for some of us. :-)

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J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I love how you put these out on Google doc. Quite a work.

Aurora Antonovic said...

The title cracked me up. :)

Borut said...

Misperception - a grand theme! Well done!

polona said...

well done again.
you also have life forms (humans or animals or both) in every stanza
and loosely interpreted there is short-long-short alternating ;)

Masago said...

Andrew: Thank you very much.

Aurora: :-) Thanks.

Borut: Thank you.

Polona: Wow, I hadn't seen that. I think I'll add those too. Thanks!

Pamela said...

This one was really living and breathing as I read it.

Masago said...

Pamela: I pleased it came to life. :-)