2007-12-16

Rengay Through the Seasons #16 [1]

by Yvonne Myers (ym), and Vaughn Seward (vs);
Rengay #16 (Dec 16-22) Verse 1 (of 6):


Shadow of a crow / on the snow in front of me — where's the bird? /ym

This rengay was written with Yvonne Myers who is the moderator of the Off-the-wall "haiku" group:

http://groups.yahoo.com/group/offthewallhaiku/

Yvonne and I wrote a rengay together in June 2007. Since then numerous rengay have been written by members of Off-the-Wall.

Click here for the previous rengay in the series.

7 comments:

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

interesting beginning.

Aurora Antonovic said...

Interesting indeed.

John McDonald said...

ditto
john

Pamela said...

caw caw... I see their shadows when they fly over the sky window

Borut said...

Yes, a good question: Where's the bird!?:)

polona said...

promising start... looking forward to this collaboration.

Masago said...

Thanks everyone!