Rengay Through the Seasons #16 Summary
by Yvonne Myers (ym), and Vaughn Seward (vs);
Rengay #16 (Dec 16-22) Summary

Shadow of a Crow

Shadow of a crow
on the snow in front of me —
where's the bird? /ym

Fired from somewhere...
a snowball finds its mark. /vs

an empty doghouse,
a frosty man /ym

The house key
slips out of my hand —
fresh drift. /vs

A sudden sound, a sneeze —
the bushes move nearby. /ym

Our toboggan
hits a bump... kids ahead
begin to scatter. /vs

We started this rengay with the theme of "Where?" but as it developed we found "Snow" was the more prominent theme. Yvonne likes a rengay to tell a story so we also chose to write this rengay with a somewhat narrative tone.

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J. Andrew Lockhart said...

well done!

Pamela said...

as I said initially - I so relate to each verse. Reminders of real life happenings.


Borut said...

A Winter Tale.:)

polona said...

both themes go well together with the season.
yes, well done both!

Masago said...

Andrew: Thanks.

Pamela: Thank you for your kind words.

Borut: You are very astute. ;-)

Polona: Thank you!