2007-12-19

Rengay Through the Seasons #16 [1-4]

by Yvonne Myers (ym), and Vaughn Seward (vs);
Rengay #16 (Dec 16-22) Verses 1-4 (of 6):


Shadow of a crow / on the snow in front of me — where's the bird? /ym
Fired from somewhere... a snowball finds its mark. /vs
Guarding / an empty doghouse, a frosty man /ym
The house key / slips out of my hand — fresh drift. /vs


Click here for the previous rengay in the series.

6 comments:

Pamela said...

I have a story for each verse...it's like an outline for book!!!

Aurora Antonovic said...

Again, good progression.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

good luck finding it. :)

John McDonald said...

good one
john

polona said...

i may be getting warm but this is one cold rengay :-)

Masago said...

Pamela: Yes, it does. I normally write rengay in a non-narrative fashion. However, Yvonne likes rengay to be on the narrative side so we decided to go with this one having a narrative character.

Aurora: Thank you.

Andrew: :-)

John: Thanks.

Polona: You are again getting warmer but on a different track. :-)