2007-12-14

Rengay Through the Seasons #15 [1-6]

by Masago: Rengay #15 (Dec 9-15), Verses 1-6 (of 6)

River ice — a muskrat glides under / in silence.
The bank's wooded edge — a magpie swoops down.
Fort facing / fort... a snowball rises / high in the air.
Backyard rink — the puck sails above / a frozen lawn.
A black, slippery patch — the brakes do their best.
The puppy tries / to make it 'round the corner — waxed hardwood.


Click here for the previous rengay in the series.

5 comments:

John McDonald said...

love the image of the puppy skidding well done
john

floots said...

loved this series
a senses of other dimensions/realities
and
of course
the need to "keep a grip" :)
cheers

Aurora Antonovic said...

I can see this! :)

polona said...

great way to end this one.

Masago said...

John: Thank you.

Floots: Well done, as usual! Thank you. One needs to always keep a grip, especially on reality. :-)

Aurora: :-)

Polana: Thank you!