2007-12-12

Rengay Through the Seasons #15 [1-4]

by Masago: Rengay #15 (Dec 9-15), Verses 1-4 (of 6)

River ice — a muskrat glides under / in silence.
The bank's wooded edge — a magpie swoops down.
Fort facing / fort... a snowball rises / high in the air.
Backyard rink — the puck sails above / a frozen lawn.


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8 comments:

Aurora Antonovic said...

My favourite sport. :)

Bill said...

Striking how, in this context, the puck seems almost weightless.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

being a redneck, I've never played that. :)

Borut said...

Ah, my hockey years on frozen lawns!:)

floots said...

i'm envious
we never had it this cold
cheers

John McDonald said...

nice movement
john

polona said...

almost surreal...
fine development

Masago said...

Aurora: It can be a lot of fun.

Bill: Yes, sometimes it "feels" that way. Thank you.

Andrew: :-)

Borut: He scores!!!

Floots: :-( Sorry 'bout that. :-)

John: Thanks.

Polona: Thank you.