2007-12-11

Rengay Through the Seasons #15 [1-3]

by Masago: Rengay #15 (Dec 9-15), Verses 1-3 (of 6)

River ice — a muskrat glides under / in silence.
The bank's wooded edge — a magpie swoops down.
Fort facing / fort... a snowball rises / high in the air.


Click here for the previous rengay in the series.

8 comments:

Aurora Antonovic said...

Aha! But who threw that snowball? It was a Churchill, Manitoba polar bear, wasn't it? (Okay, I'll stop being silly.:) )

Nice progression, Vaughn.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

this is one of the only things I like about snow. :)

Borut said...

Ah, long gone... The snow fortifications of my childhood...

John McDonald said...

coming along nicely
john

floots said...

slowly melting ..
i want snow here - NOW :)
thanks

polona said...

you can have all the snow you want...
good one!

Masago said...

Aurora: :-) Thanks.

Andrew: Ditto!

Borut: Yes, but not out of mind, eh?

John: Thanks.

Floots: :-)

Polona: Thanks. We had some more today... shoveling, again. :-(

Borut said...

My mind, as fortified as ever!:(