2007-12-13

Rengay Through the Seasons #15 [1-5]

by Masago: Rengay #15 (Dec 9-15), Verses 1-5 (of 6)

River ice — a muskrat glides under / in silence.
The bank's wooded edge — a magpie swoops down.
Fort facing / fort... a snowball rises / high in the air.
Backyard rink — the puck sails above / a frozen lawn.
A black, slippery patch — the brakes do their best.


Click here for the previous rengay in the series.

8 comments:

Pamela said...

another one that paints pictures with each verse.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

scares me to death!

Borut said...

Strangely poetic, the last one!

floots said...

the feeling of separation/dissociation
really builds up
thank you

John McDonald said...

concise and clear image
john

Aurora Antonovic said...

We've had ice storm after ice storm here, so this is a propos.

polona said...

im with floots on this one (and the series)

Masago said...

Pamela: Thank you.

Andrew: :-)

Borut: Thanks.

Floots: Ah, good observation.

John: Thanks.

Aurora: It is satisfying to be in tune with Nature. :-)

Polona: Thanks!