2008-10-27

Renhai Reflections 31: As They Sleep


As They Sleep

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)
Written 2008 Oct 25-27

A bright half-moon / as I start the early shift vacant street.
Empty doughnut shop
a police car rolls up.
A full moon / rises behind an oak
leafless branches.

6 comments:

Devika Jyothi said...

oh so much there!
in the early hours...:-)

loved the images and imagery, Masago...
the technicalities i don't bother here!
wishes!
devika

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

2 things on my mind - dark and cold

John McDonald said...

yes so much there
john

Borut said...

The Buddha nature... All about nothing!?:))

Masago said...

Thank you all!

Devika: :-) Hopefully today's notes will help.

Andrew: Yes, dark, or at least night-related is a sub-theme. And cold is certainly implied this time of year.

Borut: Right on. :-)

jem said...

Busy week, I've missed a lot. Love the way the presences and absences in this show off their opposite.