2008-11-29

Renhai Reflections 49: Chewing Things Over


Chewing Things Over

A Renhai by Daniela Bullas (db) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

A woodpecker knocks
on the family tree —
No one at home. /db

Off in the doghouse — /db
our pooch all chewed out. /vs

Bird feeder —
a squirrel reaches,
helping itself. /vs

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[Note: this Renhai has a unique aspect in it. Please check the notes for details.]

11 comments:

Devika said...

For some reason made me laugh out loud...!!

Good set, Masago :)

wishes,
devika

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

a lot to chew about :)

John McDonald said...

interesting
john

Borut said...

A nice one.

kouji said...

brilliant stuff. :O

polona said...

ha, that was a clever one!

Masago said...

Thank you all, on behalf of Daniela and me.

Pamela said...

poor dog... he just couldn't help himself. (:

A fun one!

Devika said...

Knock i will...woodpecker or not :))

came looking for new, Masago...

wishes,
devika

Janice Thomson said...

I liked the wordplay in each of these verses - especially the middle one :)

jem said...

This has a great light tone - perhaps created in part by the wordplay you mentioned - I love the gentle personifiction of each creature.