2008-12-01
Renhai Reflections 50: Chilling Portents
Chilling Portents
A Renhai by Janice Thomson (jt) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
Maple tree —
through silent branches
crisper winds. /jt
Deepening morning fog — /jt
cackle of south-flying geese. /vs
Each afternoon
the sun dips earlier —
distant range. /vs
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10 comments:
yes! I love it!
Talking about depth: 'cackle of south-flying geese'!?:)
love it too
john
sorry Masago, Borut makes me laugh out of the blue! :)
i like the first and last, Masago and Janice...
wishes,
devika
well done again, you two!
Came looking for a new one Masago...
will come again later..:)
wishes,
devika
Thank you all on behalf of Trish and me!
A strong sense of a deepening of winter in each. I especially like the phrase 'crisper winds' - it says so much and sounds as it feels.
I'm shivering.
My thanks too everyone :)
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