2008-12-01

Renhai Reflections 50: Chilling Portents


Chilling Portents

A Renhai by Janice Thomson (jt) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Maple tree —
through silent branches
crisper winds. /jt

Deepening morning fog — /jt
cackle of south-flying geese. /vs

Each afternoon
the sun dips earlier —
distant range. /vs

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10 comments:

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

yes! I love it!

Borut said...

Talking about depth: 'cackle of south-flying geese'!?:)

John McDonald said...

love it too
john

Devika said...

sorry Masago, Borut makes me laugh out of the blue! :)

i like the first and last, Masago and Janice...

wishes,
devika

polona said...

well done again, you two!

Devika said...

Came looking for a new one Masago...

will come again later..:)

wishes,
devika

Masago said...

Thank you all on behalf of Trish and me!

jem said...

A strong sense of a deepening of winter in each. I especially like the phrase 'crisper winds' - it says so much and sounds as it feels.

Pamela said...

I'm shivering.

Janice Thomson said...

My thanks too everyone :)