2008-12-16

Renhai Reflections 57: Tiny Points


Tiny Points

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

Through branches
of willow: festive lights
from their house.

Moonlight on the frost
in shoots of wild grass.

Points of brightness
dot the heavenly dome
above this meadow.

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8 comments:

Devika said...

Very Chrismas feel...
loved it, all

seasons greetings, Masago!

wishes,
devika

Janice Thomson said...

A lovely winter renhai with sparkling lights everywhere. Good one Vaughn.

get zapped said...

Wintery words bring the image to heart.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

another good one. :)

John McDonald said...

loved it
john

Masago said...

Thank you everyone, and Seasons Greetings to all!

Pamela said...

should be on a card on someone's fireplace mantel!

jem said...

Well noticed the way that other things can frame these little lights to help us notice them more.

With 'heavenly dome' are you referring to the sky? or to an actual dome? The phrase didn't quite work for me, it felt a little too heavily poetic for you? (I hope you don't mind me speaking out like this?)