2008-12-11

Renhai Reflections 55: Through Air and Space


Through Air and Space

A Renhai by Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

25th story —
a dragonfly ascends
still higher... /zh.r

Some gossamer drifts up... /zh.r
through a tree house window. /vs

Space station —
another piece from earth
put in place. /vs

Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0103.htm

[This Renhai was written with Zhanna P. Rader who was an early Rehai pioneer and was actually involved in writing the first Renhai with me.

Note: Check the notes for info about gossamer and some important linking information.]

7 comments:

Devika said...

Hi Masago..

the first and second gave a laugh..
third is an interesting piece put in place :)

the linking -- i think i get that, but will read over the weekend..

wishes,
devika

John McDonald said...

well done both
john

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

wonderful work!

Borut said...

Breathtaking new vistas!:)

polona said...

dizzying ;)
love it, though

Masago said...

Thank you all!

jem said...

Thanks for the additional information, which added heaps more to the reading.

The first one especially works for me, as someone who isn't used to high buildings, probably the highest in my town is an eight storey car-park, this gives a real sense of height.