2008-12-09

Renhai Reflections 54: Moving Along


Moving Along

A Renhai by Jerry McKenzie (jm) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Water trough race —
the crumple-horned boss prods
the other cows. /jm

The conductor tips his baton — /vs & jm
an oom-pah-pah from the tuba. /jm & vs

Rush hour —
a guy on a cell phone
blasts his horn. /vs

Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0102.htm

[The crumple-horned reference is explained in the notes as well as a description of a unique aspect in the writing of this Renhai.]

7 comments:

Devika said...

Feel the fun in Moving Along

Good set, JM and VS:)


wishes,
devika

John McDonald said...

enjoyed this
john

jem said...

The background about the 'crumple-horned' is delightful. And the middle verse couldnt help but make me smile - who can resist an 'oom-pah-pah'!!! I like the last verse a lot too - a lot of thought there, the pace of life indeed.

polona said...

love the images and the progression.

Masago said...

Thank you all!

Borut said...

Moving!... Earth-moving!?:)

Pamela said...

made me smile