2008-12-09
Renhai Reflections 54: Moving Along
Moving Along
A Renhai by Jerry McKenzie (jm) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
Water trough race —
the crumple-horned boss prods
the other cows. /jm
The conductor tips his baton — /vs & jm
an oom-pah-pah from the tuba. /jm & vs
Rush hour —
a guy on a cell phone
blasts his horn. /vs
Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0102.htm
[The crumple-horned reference is explained in the notes as well as a description of a unique aspect in the writing of this Renhai.]
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7 comments:
Feel the fun in Moving Along
Good set, JM and VS:)
wishes,
devika
enjoyed this
john
The background about the 'crumple-horned' is delightful. And the middle verse couldnt help but make me smile - who can resist an 'oom-pah-pah'!!! I like the last verse a lot too - a lot of thought there, the pace of life indeed.
love the images and the progression.
Thank you all!
Moving!... Earth-moving!?:)
made me smile
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