2008-12-05

Renhai Reflections 52: Frozen Fun


Frozen Fun

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)

Our family
goes out to skate on
the frozen creek. /vs

Down the hill on cardboard, /vs
a boot comes tumbling after. /jt

On the frigid lake
my brother nudges our
homemade iceboat. /jt

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10 comments:

polona said...

lovely winter scenery but oh so cold...
yes, i have noticed the renku-like verses :)

Devika said...

This is so cute...
I love all gradients of cold -- air, wind, snow, ice...all :)

Nice set, Masago...

wishes,
devika

John McDonald said...

lot of fun there
john

Pamela said...

it's like little pictures in a photo album

Devika said...

came looking for new one..

will come again..
wishes
devika

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

cold, but a good one! :)

Borut said...

Well, that's what life is all about: frozen moments of fun!?:)

Pat Paulk said...

Too much winter for this far south.

Masago said...

Thank you all, and welcome to winter (up here). :-)

jem said...

The middle one works so well - and perfectly captures a verse written by two - the first line setting off and that moment of not knowing what the second line will offer.

Good one both of you, and perfect for the season.