2008-12-16
Renhai Reflections 57: Tiny Points
Tiny Points
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)
Through branches
of willow: festive lights
from their house.
Moonlight on the frost
in shoots of wild grass.
Points of brightness
dot the heavenly dome
above this meadow.
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8 comments:
Very Chrismas feel...
loved it, all
seasons greetings, Masago!
wishes,
devika
A lovely winter renhai with sparkling lights everywhere. Good one Vaughn.
Wintery words bring the image to heart.
another good one. :)
loved it
john
Thank you everyone, and Seasons Greetings to all!
should be on a card on someone's fireplace mantel!
Well noticed the way that other things can frame these little lights to help us notice them more.
With 'heavenly dome' are you referring to the sky? or to an actual dome? The phrase didn't quite work for me, it felt a little too heavily poetic for you? (I hope you don't mind me speaking out like this?)
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