2008-11-29
Renhai Reflections 49: Chewing Things Over
Chewing Things Over
A Renhai by Daniela Bullas (db) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
A woodpecker knocks
on the family tree —
No one at home. /db
Off in the doghouse — /db
our pooch all chewed out. /vs
Bird feeder —
a squirrel reaches,
helping itself. /vs
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[Note: this Renhai has a unique aspect in it. Please check the notes for details.]
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11 comments:
For some reason made me laugh out loud...!!
Good set, Masago :)
wishes,
devika
a lot to chew about :)
interesting
john
A nice one.
brilliant stuff. :O
ha, that was a clever one!
Thank you all, on behalf of Daniela and me.
poor dog... he just couldn't help himself. (:
A fun one!
Knock i will...woodpecker or not :))
came looking for new, Masago...
wishes,
devika
I liked the wordplay in each of these verses - especially the middle one :)
This has a great light tone - perhaps created in part by the wordplay you mentioned - I love the gentle personifiction of each creature.
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