Several toys
emerge out of the snow...
spring thaw.
A butterfly on her nose
closes its coloured wings.
Through the clouds
the sun is sharp and clear -
cool on the eyes.
Dad attempts to whip up
a batch of scrambled eggs.
Autumn lawn...
more leaf mulching
than grass cutting.
The shuttle launch is delayed
because of too many vultures.
First snowfall...
here is a Christmas card
to be mailed, last year.
I lift the sheets and there
within, a little bed bug.
In her new
easy-bake oven she burns
a roast chicken.
This is a three-by-three interlocking renku I call a rubricku. The first stanza starts with Spring and then the poem works through all the seasons in order. The last stanza "easy-bake", is a central component of the poem that links to every other stanza. The season stanzas (hokku) are haiku I have previously written that have been chosen by various haiku on-line "publications", i.e.:
Spring (picked by Edward Weiss, wisteriapress.com):
Several toys
emerge out of the snow...
spring thaw.
Summer (picked by Sondra Ball, sondra.net/al/):
Through the clouds
the sun is sharp and clear -
cool on the eyes.
Autumn (picked by Susumu Takiguchi, World Haiku Showcase):
Autumn lawn
more leaf cutting
than grass cutting.
Winter (picked by Serge Tome, www.tempslibres.org/tl/en/cconv.html):
First snowfall...
here is a Christmas card
to be mailed, last year.
I have prepared a two dimensional representation of this rubricku showing the linkages between stanzas and other renku aspects:
http://members.shaw.ca/vseward/Masago_Rubricku_2007-10-07.pdf
Click the following for some further information about Rubricku including a template for writing your own:
http://haikuworkshop.pbwiki.com/
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Masagoo-no-haiku
sand storm
(meaning... your haiku really blew me away. wow)
great stuff vaugh (loved the toys appearing)
john
very impressive!
to a layman like me
it is simply a beautiful poem
well done
wow! this is great, vaughn!
Thank you for explaining this! How interesting. I may try this, too. :)
p.s.- good collection of published work. :)
Like Floots, man a really good poem!!
Pamela: I am pleased you found and enjoyed the sand storm! :-)
John: Thank you.
Don: Thanks.
Floots: Thanks (does that make me clergy?). :-)
Polona: Thank you.
Andrew: I am glad you enjoyed this and that you are interested in trying to write one yourself. I have added some further information about Rubricku here:
Haikuworkshop Wiki
The "What is a Rubricku" page also contains a a template you can use to assist in writing it:
Rubricku Template
Dustin: Thank you for your kind words. I'd like to see your Reneal if you are able to make that available.
Pat: Thank you, my friend.
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