863. Time Bank

snooze button...
i savour a few moments
of borrowed time



Anonymous said...

I like it. Is this a variation of a poem you wrote a couple of months back, Masago?

Aurora said...

i dream i ask
for a lighter sentence...
snooze button
- by Super Haijin Vaughn

Oh NO! You've plagiarized yourself! :):):) (Kidding. The differences are apparent and important. Good write.)

Anonymous said...

unless you have a cat

Why do we use the snooze button anyway. Its bad enough to get woken once. but twice in the same morning is just torture.

John McDonald said...


Pat Paulk said...

A good rewrite Vaughn!!

floots said...

my insomniac soul yearns for such stolen moments
nice one :)

polona said...

love those stolen moments :)

Masago said...

SB: Thanks. It contains the same topic but has a different "theme" (how many butterfly or frog haiku are there?). :-)

Aurora: Yikes! Thanks.

Pamela: Yeah, we had a cat as a kid.
But the snooze button I still have. But I don't abuse it like someone I know. His wife says most days he hits the snooze button 6 or 7 times over the course of an hour. I'm not that bad, I only hit it 2 or 3 times. :-)

John: Thanks.

Floots: Thanks.

Polona: Thanks.

Tikkis said...

My wife claims that I have a snoring button hiding somewhere in our sofa!

dsnake1 said...

love this!
i hit the snooze button too. :)

Masago said...

Tikkis: :-)

dsnake1: Thanks.