2007-09-24

Rengay Through the Seasons #4 [1-2]

by Karina Klesko (kk), and Vaughn Seward (vs);
Rengay 4, Verses 1-2 (of 6):


Autumn afternoon — rose petals cling / to the cemetery gate. /kk
Embracing at the door... an ebony hair on his shirt. /vs

Click here for the previous rengay in the series.

7 comments:

aurora said...

Fantastic start! (Although I have to tell you that when I saw your initials, "vs", "Victoria's Secret" immediately came to mind. :) )

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

good lines -- I'm laughing about Aurora's comment! :)

floots said...

a nice sense of intimacy developing

Borut said...

Good. ... I'm turning into a tree expert...!?:)

John McDonald said...

looks good
john

polona said...

things are heating up :)

Masago said...

Aurora: *LOL*

Andrew: :-)

Floots: We'll see... :-)

Borut: *Hee, hee*

John: Thanks.

Polona: Yep... :-)