2007-09-28

Rengay Through the Seasons #4 [1-6]

by Karina Klesko (kk), and Vaughn Seward (vs);
Rengay 4, Verses 1-6 (of 6):


Autumn afternoon — rose petals cling / to the cemetery gate. /kk
Embracing at the door... an ebony hair on his shirt. /vs
Harvest moon — red acrylic fingernails / open old love letters. /kk
A ladybug / holds tight to a twig — cool wind. /vs
Late night fishing — black-skirted spinnerbait /kk
Harbour lights — the squeak of a rusty hinge /hangs in the air. /vs

Click here for the previous rengay in the series.

8 comments:

aurora said...

Fantastic! You two work well together.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I really love what you added!

Borut said...

Ditto Aurora and Andrew.

floots said...

fascinating collage of experience/observation
thank you

John McDonald said...

yes I agree with everyone
john

polona said...

well rounded up!
really superb stuff

haiku-shelf said...

i enjoyed to read the verses

best wishes,
Angelika

Masago said...

Aurora, Andrew, Floots, John, Polona, Angelika: Karina and I thank you all for your kind words and support.