2007-09-30

Rengay Through the Seasons #5 [1]

by Masago: Rengay 5 (Sep 30 - Oct 6), Verse 1 (of 6)

Autumn morning —
an old barn bites down
into the ground.

Click here for the previous rengay in the series.

9 comments:

Richard Kay said...

I think I've seen this opening piece before. Recycling perhaps? I really like it.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

very visual

floots said...

love the imagery of this
great start

John McDonald said...

good start vaughn
john

Borut said...

The end as a beginning...!?

aurora said...

And what comes next...? :)

get zapped said...

I can see this! Very nice tribute to autumn's arrival.

polona said...

a promising start.
and i'm quite sure we've seen this haiku before on its own

Masago said...

Thank you all.

Yes, this was posted an August 18, 2007. That was the period between last year's haiku project and this year's rengay project.

The first verse of each solo rengay are from haiku that I wrote back in 2005. This one happened to slip through in this recent August between-project postings. :-)

Borut: You may have something...