2007-09-11

Rengay Through the Seasons #2 [1-3]

by Masago: Rengay 2, Verses 1-3 (of 6)

The faint thump / of a distant basketball — autumn evening.
Canola field horizon — a glint of setting sun.
That area / in Grandma's back yard — hint of mint.

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8 comments:

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

hear, see, and smell -- wonderful!

floots said...

yes - that hint of mint is so evocative

Borut said...

A mystery story - I can hardly wait to hear the sequel...!?:)

John McDonald said...

lovely progression
john

aurora said...

Fantastic.

get zapped said...
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get zapped said...

Late summer is what these evoke...so well.

Masago said...

Andrew: You are very perceptive. :-)

Floots: My grandmother actually had a little patch of mint at the side of the house. When we stepped out the back door we'd get an instant whiff.

Borut: Thanks (Rengay are not actually intended to be narrative but sometimes they work out that way). :-)

John: Thanks.

Aurora: Thank you!

GZ: Thank you very much.