2007-09-06

Rengay Through the Seasons #1 [1-5]

by Masago: Rengay 1, Verses 1-5 (of 6)

A green sprig / pokes above the edge — eaves trough.
Leaves in the back yard, a frisbee almost buried.
Rear car window — "Wash Me" handwritten / in stuck-on dust.
Dirty dishes / spread on the kitchen table... vase of daisies.
A boy in his room — his stuff on the floor.

9 comments:

aurora said...

Nice progression. :)

floots said...

aurora said it for me :)

John McDonald said...

nice
john

Borut said...

My 'time for automn cleaning' comment was supposed to have been posted here. My mood at the moment...!?:)

Pat Paulk said...

You peeking in my office window???

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

you sure you're not in my house? :)

Masago said...

Thank you guys!

Pat & Andrew: You crack me up. :-)

[Tomorrow I'll post a recap and a link to the project worksheet I used to write this rengay.]

Pamela said...

awwww... it's beginning to make more sense.

Masago said...

Pamela: Thanks. Hope you enjoy what is to come. :-)