by Masago: Rengay 1, Verses 1-5 (of 6)
A green sprig / pokes above the edge — eaves trough.
Leaves in the back yard, a frisbee almost buried.
Rear car window — "Wash Me" handwritten / in stuck-on dust.
Dirty dishes / spread on the kitchen table... vase of daisies.
A boy in his room — his stuff on the floor.
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Nice progression. :)
aurora said it for me :)
nice
john
My 'time for automn cleaning' comment was supposed to have been posted here. My mood at the moment...!?:)
You peeking in my office window???
you sure you're not in my house? :)
Thank you guys!
Pat & Andrew: You crack me up. :-)
[Tomorrow I'll post a recap and a link to the project worksheet I used to write this rengay.]
awwww... it's beginning to make more sense.
Pamela: Thanks. Hope you enjoy what is to come. :-)
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