by Max Verhart (mv), and Vaughn Seward (vs);
Rengay #12 (Nov 18-24) Verses 1-6 (of 6):
Hazy sunlight — a cloud of lapwings / practicing. /mv
After school at the piano... thoughts of other places. /vs
Rattling shutters — Checking the condition / of my sweaters. /mv
The graying hare / hops into a willow thicket — overcast day. /vs
A kid's shoe with a carrot / sitting near the fireplace. /mv
A grizzly lingers / in a patch of rose hips — darkening sky. /vs
[Black bears and grizzlies eat rose hips in the fall. ]
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5 comments:
I have been studying soooo much about bears, that this latest addition of yours startled me! Bears bears everywhere! (I'm checking beneath my bed before I go to sleep tonight. :))
Good progression, Vaughn.
after the wind and the clouds, rain is forecast here.
not that this has anything to do with this exquisite rengay (oh wait, perhaps it does :-))
hazy sunlight to darkening sky; i like the dynamism in this rengay
much love
gillena
this captures the seasonal transition beautifully
thank you both
Andrew: Thank you.
Aurora: Thanks... sleep tight. ;-)
Polona: Thanks... :-)
Gillena: Thank you.
Floots: Thank you, good to see you back. :-)
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