by Masago: Rengay #14 (Dec 2-8), Verses 1-6 (of 6)
The dog's legs / have become shorter — first snowfall.
Playground sunset shadows — school kids grow taller.
Around and around — the kitten almost catches / its own tail.
I put my finger / through the parrot's cage — Polly's cracker?
Seated, we wait to leave — the train beside us backs up.
Empty koi pond — an orange leaf "swims" / toward me.
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7 comments:
oh, i see you've already posted the complete rengay.
i love its liveliness :)
nice add on
Very nice return.
Thinking of it, the last one looks very Buddhist-coloured to me: formless emptiness and orange - being disireless...?:)So, where are we going Vaughn!?:)
nothing is what it seems
it's how one looks at it
loved this series
thank you
another good sequence
john
Polona: Yes, on Friday's I often post early. Thank you. :-)
Andrew: Thanks.
Aurora: Thank you.
Borut: I wasn't actually going there but I am intrigued by your interpretation. Well done!
Floots: Thank you! (You nailed it again).
John: Thank you.
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